Name: Ahmose Kelthaki
Gender: Male
Race: Drow
Profession: Rogue
Age: 150

Appereance:Ahmose is a normal sized drow teen.He is blind in his left eye.He lost it as a tribute to his god Corellon.She made all of his kind pay their left eye because just as she hates orcs she also hates Drows and cannot think of a better way to punish her enemies than to lose their left eye, just as she did to Grumsh. He can be found wearing elven chainmail armor Corellon priests so that he may take his revenge.He is also missing his right arm entirely.

Personality:Ahmose is of independent nature.He lives alone and supplies himself with things to keep him alive.He is a poorly mannered teen with a short temper. He hates orcs and humans and will kill any he can find.

Background:He was born and raised in an underground drow metropolis. He live as royalty as his parents were the head priests. In his town the priest and priestess of Corellons' Temple were the heads of the town.He lived a religious life style until the Day of Revealing Sun. On this day the humans living on the surface broke through the ground and destroyed his town while the drow inhabitants were dazed from the sudden exposure to the sun.Now he (and the other survivors of the attack) has sworn to destroy all human decendants of those who killed his people along with orcs.He is also very clumsy with his left hand so he fights ONLY with his right hand.His society decided to worship Corellon because she, like them, hates orcs.Although they knew what they had to pay as a tribute they would stop at nothing to get revenge.Going to Riverside was a very risky desicion for him as he hates any decendant of the humans who killed his people and ONLY those humans.Now his story begins.....

Languages:Celestial,Draconic,Orc
He knows the language of the gods so that he may call upon their advice, strength, and wisdom to take his revenge. He knows the languages of his kind (Elf) so that he may also call upon them for aid in his quest for revenge.He knows the language of his (soon to be) dragon cohort so he may develop more powerful bonds between him and his dragon.

Stats:

Strength:14
Dexterity:17
Charisma:14
Intelligence:19
Constitution:11
Wisdom:16

Well, there are some things that you need to change before I can approve your character.

First of all you cannot be a half-doppelganger as doppelgangers do not exist in this world.

You have taken on to many benefits and no drawbacks. One think I cannot allow you to take is the "Ability to read minds" as this will require a certain level of powerplay and metaplay, besides it would not be possible to you to dictates others actions. Another thing is you cannot have an armor forged by Corellon, but I will allow a chain mail blessed by corellon priests.

I dont like the fact that he is blind on both eyes, as this will be a major drawback for you character.

I will need a much better background:
- Why did the drows of that society decide to worship Corellon?
- Why would he come to a place among humans, to risk being trained by a human, if he hates humans so much he only cares to kill them?

You have too many languages, you are only allowed to have 3 langauges.

And you need to start at 150 years of age, as you are drow.

/DragonMaster