Emit

Why can't I change my name?

Name: Undertaker Kambo
Gender: Male
Race: human
Profession: fighter
Age: 15

Appearance:
short black hair, blood shot eyes, dragon tattoo on back, 6'6, muscular, golden teeth.


Personality:
Undertaker tries to help anyone he can, and is for any body. A really great guy to hang out with, as long as your are not a Dwarf, a Gnome, or a Halfling as he dislikes those races and his judgment is done. Regardless of the demon and anger, he dose have a soft side. It just takes a good first impression. Well, actualy, it is more of a pity, and mersyful side.


Background:
Undertakers parents did not care for him. They were rich and prissy, never spending time with him, or even giving him an alouence. When he was about eight, he became jelous of his parents, and decided to rob them. If it were just money stollen, they would have cared not. But this was their most prize possetion. An investagator came, and evidence pointed quickly to Undertaker. His parents beat him, then gave him away to foster parents. This family was poor, dew to drug abuse. For four years, he lived with them, sometimes sneeking drugs. His better stelth gave him the inspiration to become a dealer. At his first attempt to sell drugs, he ended up meeting a gaurd, who was off duty. That did not matter, soon other guards came, and through him in the dungon. The next two years he spent in the dungon, with other criminals. Undertaker would do pullups on the bars over head. At first, it was hard, from getting his hands wiped everytime his fingers went out. But, eventualy he became tough towards it, and the wipping was just part of his exorsize. Soon, his uper body became realy strong. Rust had grown on the bars, and he soon was able to brake the old bars, and escape. The gard tried to wipe him, but in desperation, Undertaker just attacked, and ended up haging the man with his own wipe. Everyone else in the dungon also managed to escape. No alarm was sounded.

Feeling worthless to life, Undertaker decided to hunt in a most evil place. A place nobody knows the name of, and only the darkes can find it. With a morning star, he started to kill demons. The head demon was not at all happy with this, and forever cursed him to be one in death, and possesed part time by one in life. His apperence is because of this.

Not knowing why, Undertaker was sent back home, to his first parents homes. Anger swirled inside of him, and he had the erge to kill. But nobody was home. He started to smash the railings and bust the walls. Drink the drinks and poisen the foods. He was on a role. Nobody knows how it happened, but suddenly the house caught on fire. He likes to think it was him, but is not sure. Little did he know, that was no longer his parents house.

Still, the demon inside feeling unsatisfide, lusted for more power. "What is more powerful then a dragon?" he thought.

Sure a dragon would be a fine prize for this sad boy, but the accadimy he learned, teaches to increase power, and to use dragons. These were his belifes, so proudly and twistedly, he joined the accadimy.
Languages: Infernal (language of the devils), Common, English.

Stats:
Strength: 16
Dexterity: 12
Constitution: 12
Intelligence: 16
Wisdom: 14
Charisma: 12
Melee Weapon Usage: 11
Ranged Weapon Usage: 11
Defense: 11
Magick Points: 20

for your picture to work use that link in between the http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/en/d/d9/Spawn_Classic.jpg

Its the same picture, just with no link in it, or anything, so that will show for sure..

I still don't see a personality for his split personality. i've seen he changes when he is angry, but that is really not how that works. Its sometimes in moments of stress and maybe insecure and so on, in that you are right, but what I need is this;

Example:

Name: Kara Millson (Vandar rosewood)

Age: 15 (20)

appearence:
kara is a tall girl with blond hair, and deep blue eyes. She usually wear dresses or ropes, and have style into everything she does.

Personality(Kara):
Kara is a joyful girl, who tries to get the best out of anything, and believes the best in everyone. She is a silent girl, who spends much time with her books, though as soon as it comes to magic, you don't see one more devoted to battlespells than her.
She is afraid of the dark, and too many people, and totally panics if she is captured by someone, and has no way of escape.

Personality(Vandar):
Vandar is a vicious male, who likes to play with people, thinking he is way better thaneveryone, including the teachers. He is manipulative, and tries to keep it that way, as he still has the strengh of a human girl.
He likes to get people into trouble, and is quick to get himself out of them, though he always forgets such people as "friends". '
He doesn't want any friends, and he thinks people are weak for believing in him, and Kara.
Feelings are for weak people, and his motto is: there are two kinds of people. Those with power, and those who dare not take it. I know where I stand, but where do you?

etc...


I know that this has nothing to do with your character, but it was to show how you can make those to personalities, and the colors is for how you can make other players known who you are playing. not exactly my colours, but just tewo different. I know it can be hard, but sadly its necesarry is you are to be approved. Otherwise, you can keep that split personality out of your character, and instead say something like this:


Personality:
Undertaker tries to help anyone he can, and is for amny a really great guy to hang out with, as long as your are not a Dwarf, a Gnome, or a Halfling as he dislikes those races and his judgement is done. he rarely gets mad, and if he has to, he can hang around with the halflings, gnomes, and Dwarfs too, without showing any sign of disapproval.
But if one first touch his buttons, and if he first gets angry, all hell is loose, and he become like a completely different person. His demonic childhood begins to show, as he is vicious, and vengeful, getting out of control, and is only thinking about how he can kill the person.


Again this is only an example shown on undertaker, but its completely up to you, and I will let you decide.
I will look at the first message you wrote, every day to check, and then I you just edit that post, so you don't have a profil filled up with spam from yourself.. ^^

hope you understood, and if you have any question, please send me a pm, and I will answer quickly. ^^

Love

/Mira

tries to help out anyone he can, dislikes Dwarves, Gnomes and Halflings as long if they don't get him angry, he is a okay guy to get along with,

very good... Again nice background, but as you still have a split personality, I want a personality for that "person"

You have undertaker and predetor. You have given it a name, which is great, but it feels like you haven't been reading my last post about making a personality especially for Predetor also.

I made an example and its okay you copied that into your own profile, but try and read it again, and if you are having a difficult time coming up with another personality, then don't have it. After that personality, you are okay and ready to play.

hold on....

There is something i dont understand at all here. You are a human. Now why are you born in the demonic plane? Are your parents human or demons? Can demons make babys at all, or are you a halfbreed?

Why do you have red eyes and golden teath? who is his master, when did he get him, and what does this master teach him?

Why did the gnomes, halflings and dwarfes torture him?

and again with the languges....why do you speak demon?

....im sorry but i dont get it....

Hay, I want you to know, that I had nothing to do with it. I regret anything that happened to You, Undertaker, just because anything that makes a person evil is not a good thing. Hay, I was in war, tourture is not preaty. Come find me one day, and I will help you get things more clear, or get rid of things you don't want anymore. Just be patient, ok Undertaker? I know you are trying, the only problem is things don't make sence. It isn't that you need more intoresting details of you background, just why. Don't add to much, because that is not what we are looking for. I mean, not from where you stand anyways.