I don't know whether to talk in third person as in Quiver? has enterd the building, or as self action as I am entering the building.
Also, any sugestions for better detail for action?

You could use <name> but other than that it is also possible to use He/She. You have to remember that you are not seeing things from the persons perspective, but from a 3rd person view.

You need to detail the action your character takes, even thoughts and feelings can be portraited this way and in your posts. Remembar that the more information you can give in a certain situation, the more your opposing player can reach to. Off-course are thoughts something that you cannot react to.

I would reconment that you decide what you want to use and then stick to it, but try not to use I in your posts (unless its O.O.C. (Out Of Character)).

/DragonMaster